We have taken our unique opportunity to correct errors and to enforce a standard of English usage. We list our changes here. If you see anything that needs correction, please contact the Project Aon Staff.
(The Story So Far . . .) Replaced 'elite' with 'élite', 'Kai lord' with 'Kai Lord', 'freestate' with 'Freeland', and 're-birth' with 'rebirth'.
(The Game Rules) Replaced '13-onwards' with 'Book 13 onwards'.
(Grand Master Disciplines) Replaced 'gods' with 'Gods'. Replaced 'their COMBAT SKILL' with 'their ENDURANCE' under Deliverance. It seems unlikely that the COMBAT SKILL score would ever be reduced to such a low level. We assume that this was intended to be ENDURANCE instead.
(Equipment) Replaced all occurrences of 'arrow' or 'arrows' with 'Arrow'.
(Improved Grand Master Disciplines) Replaced 'etc,' with 'etc.,', 'discipline' with 'Discipline', and 'Magi-Magic' with 'Magi-magic'. Replaced 'arrow' with 'Arrow'. Replaced 'infra-vision' with 'infravision'.
(1) Replaced 'Bo'sun' with 'bo'sun' and 'look-outs' with 'lookouts'.
(5) Replaced 'veterans' with 'Veterans'.
(11) Replaced 'arrow' with 'Arrow'.
(12) Replaced 'the Sword of Helshezag' with 'Helshezag'.
(17) Replaced 'arrow' with 'Arrow' and 'bow' with 'Bow'.
(29) Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon's speech in favour of italicizing the text.
(32) Replaced 'rib-cage' with 'rib cage'.
(34) Replaced 'arrow' with 'Arrow'.
(35) Replaced 'potholes' with 'pot-holes'.
(37) Replaced 'statuette' with 'Statuette'.
(38) Replaced 'torch-lit' with 'torchlit'.
(42) Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon's speech in favour of italicizing the text.
(43) Replaced 'pin-point' with 'pinpoint'.
(46) Replaced both occurrences of 'arrow' with 'Arrow'. Replaced both occurrences of 'bow' with 'Bow'.
(50) Replaced 'ice dragon' with 'Ice Dragon'.
(54) Replaced 'Kai lord' with 'Kai Lord'.
(55) Replaced 'stalagtites' with 'stalactites'.
(56) Replaced 'torch-lit' with 'torchlit'.
(57) Replaced 'torch-lit' with 'torchlit'.
(62) Replaced 'bow' with 'Bow' and 'arrow' with 'Arrow'.
(67) Replaced 'potholes' with 'pot-holes'.
(70) Replaced 'backpack' with 'Backpack'.
(73) Replaced 'god' with 'God' and 'arrow' with 'Arrow'.
(76) Replaced 'enough for 3 doses. Each dose restores 4 ENDURANCE points after combat.' with 'enough for 3 doses--each dose restores 4 ENDURANCE points after combat'.
(80) Replaced 'here. within' with 'here within' (the word 'within' also began on a new line which has also been fixed).
(82) Replaced 'torch-lit' with 'torchlit'.
(87) Replaced 'far-stronger' with 'far stronger'.
(91) Replaced 'arrow' with 'Arrow' and 'bow' with 'Bow'.
(94) Replaced 'arrow in your quiver' with 'Arrow in your Quiver'.
(99) Replaced 'arrow' with 'Arrow'.
(100) Italicized the speech of the disembodied voice and removed the quotation marks. Replaced 'Zargarna' with 'Zagarna'.
(102) Replaced 'arrow' with 'Arrow' and both occurrences of 'bow' with 'Bow'.
(105) Replaced 'Bandedon' with 'Banedon'. Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon's speech in favour of italicizing the text. Replaced 'Spell of Holding' with 'spell of Holding'.
(106) Replaced 'god' with 'God'.
(107) Replaced 'out-run' with 'outrun' and 'discipline' with 'Discipline'.
(113) Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon's speech in favour of italicizing the text.
(116) Replaced 'god' with 'God'.
(121) Replaced 'semi-circular' with 'semicircular'.
(124) Replaced 'discipline' with 'Discipline'.
(125) Replaced 'arrow' with 'Arrow' and 'bow' with 'Bow'.
(131) Replaced 'arrow' with 'Arrow' and 'any of the above' with 'either of the above'.
(132) Replaced 'veterans' with 'Veterans'.
(135) Replaced 'arrow' with 'Arrow' and 'war-hound's' with 'warhound's'.
(139) Replaced 'Grandmastery of Nexus' with 'mastery of Grand Nexus'.
(140) Replaced 'spear' with 'Spear'.
(143) Replaced 'arrow' with 'Arrow'.
(144) Replaced 'out-distance' with 'outdistance' and 'potholes' with 'pot-holes'.
(148) Replaced 'carcases' with 'carcasses'.
(152) Replaced 'torch-lit' with 'torchlit'.
(154) Replaced 'Eight' with 'Eight,'. Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon's speech in favour of italicizing the text.
(156) Replaced 'egorghs' with 'Egorghs'.
(157) Italicized the speech of the disembodied voice and removed the quotation marks.
(158) Replaced 'arrow' with 'Arrow'.
(159) Replaced 'arrow' with 'Arrow'.
(170) Replaced 'Zargarna's' with 'Zagarna's'.
(175) Replaced 'spyhole' with 'spy-hole'.
(192) Replaced 'clear oily' with 'clear, oily' and 'clear oily inflammable' with 'clear, oily, inflammable'.
(199) Replaced both occurrences of 'arrow' with 'Arrow'. Replaced 'bow' with 'Bow'.
(200) Replaced 'pin-points' with 'pinpoints'.
(209) Replaced 'stalagtites' with 'stalactites'.
(211) Replaced 'Immmediately' with 'Immediately' and '(In' with '(in'.
(212) Replaced 'turn to 331' with 'turn to 311'.
(216) Emphasized 'clang'.
(217) Replaced 'torch-lit' with 'torchlit'.
(218) Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon's speech in favour of italicizing the text.
(220) Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon's speech in favour of italicizing the text.
(221) Replaced 'arrow' with 'Arrow' and 'bow' with 'Bow'.
(224) Replaced 'spyhole' with 'spy-hole'.
(227) Replaced 'arrow' with 'Arrow'.
(228) Emphasized the word 'both' in the last choice.
(231) Replaced both occurrences of 'arrow' with 'Arrow'. Replaced 'bow' with 'Bow'.
(236) Replaced 'irresistable' with 'irresistible'.
(239) Replaced 'the sword of Helshezag' with 'Helshezag'.
(240) Replaced 'Kai-surge' with 'Kai-screen'. Section 184 speaks of 'powerful mind defences'.
(241) Replaced both occurrences of 'liganim' with 'Liganim'.
(243) Replaced 'arrow' with 'Arrow' and 'bow' with 'Bow'. Emphasized 'inflammable' to mirror Section 192. Replaced 'clear oily' with 'clear, oily' and 'clear oily inflammable' with 'clear, oily, inflammable'.
(245) Replaced 'bow' with 'Bow' and 'arrow' with 'Arrow'.
(248) Replaced 'eeks' with 'ekes'.
(251) Replaced 'arrow' with 'Arrow' and 'bow' with 'Bow'.
(261) Replaced 'egorgh' with 'Egorgh'.
(264) Replaced 'torch-lit' with 'torchlit'.
(266) Replaced 'out-run' with 'outrun'.
(280) Replaced 'veterans' with 'Veterans'.
(295) Replaced 'death cry' with 'death-cry' and 'potholes' with 'pot-holes'.
(300) Replaced 'handrails' with 'hand-rails' and 'commmunicate' with 'communicate'. Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon's speech in favour of italicizing the text.
(305) Replaced both occurrences of 'arrow' with 'Arrow'. Replaced 'bow' with 'Bow'
(318) Replaced 'discipline' with 'Discipline' and 'egorgh' with 'Egorgh'.
(326) Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon's speech in favour of italicizing the text.
(328) Replaced 'liganim' with 'Liganim'.
(329) Replaced 'potholes' with 'pot-holes'.
(332) Replaced 'potholes' with 'pot-holes'.
(334) Replaced 'arrow' with 'Arrow'.
(335) Replaced 'arrow' with 'Arrow'.
(336) Italicized the speech of the disembodied voice and removed the quotation marks.
(340) Replaced both occurrences of 'spyhole' with 'spy-hole'.
(345) Replaced 'bowsting' with 'bowstring'.
(346) Replaced 'bow' with 'Bow'.
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Text copyright © 1991 Joe Dever.
Illustrations copyright © 1991 Brian Williams.